Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.

Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health. jRRW8
The chart indicates acid level in the mouth of 3 differnt sweet foods which are fruit sugar, cane sugar and honey. All of them can be a cause of tooth decay. Overall, it is clear from the chart that acidity starts at pH 7 at the moment we have eaten which it is not a level that can cause the tooth decay, while the acid level below pH 5. 5 is the level that tooth decay occurs. After we ate sweet foods for 5 minutes, cane sugar has the highest level of acidity at around pH 3 and its acidity constantly decrease until 30 minutes the acid level will be at 5. 5. At this level, tooth decay is unlikely to happen. The second is fruit sugar. The highest acid level of fruit sugar is approximately pH 4. 5 before it climbed up to pH 5. 5 after we ate for 20 minutes. Honey has the lowest acidity level at nearly pH 5 but it remains at the same level longer than other sweet foods. it is stable at that level for another 5 minutes before gradually up and reaches the safe zone of tooth decay about 13 minutes later.
The chart indicates
acid
level
in the mouth of 3
differnt
sweet foods which are fruit
sugar
, cane
sugar
and honey. All of them can be a cause of tooth decay.

Overall
, it is
clear
from the chart that acidity
starts
at pH 7 at the moment we have eaten which it is not a
level
that can cause the tooth
decay
, while the
acid
level
below pH 5. 5 is the
level
that tooth
decay
occurs.

After we
ate
sweet foods for 5 minutes, cane
sugar
has the highest
level
of acidity at around pH 3 and its acidity
constantly
decrease until 30 minutes the
acid
level
will be at 5. 5. At this
level
, tooth
decay
is unlikely to happen. The second is fruit
sugar
. The highest
acid
level
of fruit
sugar
is approximately pH 4. 5
before
it climbed up to pH 5. 5 after we
ate
for 20 minutes.

Honey has the lowest acidity
level
at
nearly
pH 5
but
it remains at the same
level
longer than other sweet foods.
it
is stable at that
level
for another 5 minutes
before
gradually
up and reaches the safe zone of tooth
decay
about 13 minutes later.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts