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The diagram below show the stage and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose.

The diagram below show the stage and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose. E33ML

The given process charts illutrate the way in which cement production are produced for building purpose. According to the provided presentation, to begin with, limestone and clay have to put on crusher for making powder which goes into mixer for making. At the sencond stage, powder which is go through by rotating heater for applying heat. if the powder is heated with helping of heater, it can be puted on grind err. after that row material is used for making cement. finally the cement is packed into the bags. As can be seen that initially 15%of cement and 10%of water are added into the concrete mixer for rotating. At the same time sand (25%)and geavel (50%) have to add for making concrete production. Unless the row material is collected into the concrete mixer, it can not be ready for using into building purpose. At last stage it is ready to use for construction. From the overall analysis, the process of cement and concrete is a complex which passes trough distinct stages before material is ready to be used.

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given
 process charts Possible spelling mistake found.illustrate
illutrate
 the way in which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 production are produced
 for building purpose.

According to the provided presentation, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, limestone and clay This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 put on crusher for making powder which goes into mixer for making. At the Possible spelling mistake found.second
sencond
 stage, powder which is Consider using a past participle here: "gone".gone
go
 through by rotating heater for applying heat. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
 the powder is heated
 with helping of heater, it can be Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "put", the past tense form of the verb 'put'?putmutedoutedpuntedputtedpuked
puted
 on grind err. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 that row material is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?finally,
finally
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
is packed
 into the bags.

As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that initially
 15%of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 and 10%of water are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 into the concrete mixer for rotating. At the same time sand (25%)and Possible spelling mistake found.gravelgavel
geavel
 (50%) This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 for making concrete production. Unless the row material is collected
 into the concrete mixer, it can not be ready for using into building purpose. At last stage it is ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for construction.

From the overall
 analysis, the process of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 and concrete is a complex which passes trough distinct stages This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 material is ready to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
. 