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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002 Jooej
The bar chart provides information about average phone calls, which are billions, are also a plethora of connection times according to the data, in the United Kingdom. The classification is separated three columns among 1995 to 2002. Overall, all of them have a stability situation based on that knowledge. Two of them, which are called “National and international- fixed lines”, and “Mobiles”, are increased, but for other types of categorizing has not that point because of “Local- fixed lines” in 1999. On the other hand, for smartphones, the numbers are increased significantly and certainly. There are 35% differences from 1995 to 2002 as well as the statistics are became to go up faster than other years among 2000 to 2002. In the latest year, the data shows that the type of class has almost forty percentages at the same time in that year the categories’ statistics are near with each other. Meanwhile, those outcomes are remained by classification of overseas and national as same. However, the most popular type is risen dramatically at least in 1999, after that the column is reduced almost suddenly. Consequently, the percentages said that the most familiar category has still been accounted for 75% in the closest year by local type.
The bar chart provides information about average phone calls, which are billions, are
also
a plethora of connection times according to the data, in the United Kingdom. The classification
is separated
three columns among 1995 to 2002.

Overall
, all of them have a stability situation based on that knowledge. Two of them, which
are called
“National and international-
fixed
lines”, and “Mobiles”,
are increased
,
but
for
other
types
of categorizing has not that point
because
of “Local-
fixed
lines” in 1999.

On the
other
hand, for smartphones, the numbers
are increased
significantly
and
certainly
. There are 35% differences from 1995 to 2002
as well
as the statistics are
became
to go up faster than
other
years among 2000 to 2002. In the latest
year
, the data
shows
that the
type
of
class
has almost forty percentages at the same time in that
year
the categories’ statistics are near with each
other
. Meanwhile, those outcomes
are remained
by classification of overseas and national as same.

However
, the most popular
type
is risen
dramatically
at least in 1999, after that the column is
reduced
almost
suddenly
.
Consequently
, the percentages said that the most familiar category has
still
been accounted
for 75% in the closest
year
by local
type
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002

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