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The table gives information on consumer spending on five different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table gives information on consumer spending on five different items in five different countries in 2002. GMMbg
The table shows the percentages of the expenditure on 3 different goods in five major countries in the year 2002. It is clear that all the countries spent most if their money on Food/Drinks/Tabacco while the least amount went to Leisure/Education. Overall, Turkish were more attracted to consume these items whereas Swedish showed less attention to these categories. 32. 14% national consumer expenditure went to Food /Drinks/Tobacco in Turkey in 2002, which was the highest percentage shows on the table. Irish consumer also spent a noticeable amount on the item at 28. 91% ( the second highest expenditure). Ireland and Turkey, in contrast, consumed only 2. 21% and 4. 35% respectively on Leisure/Education. However, all the five countries spent almost similar amount on Clothing/Footwear. Moreover, Italy, Spain and Sweden consumed almost same amount of Food/Drinks/Tobacc. The lowest expenditure by any countries in this given year was on Leisure/Education at 1. 98%, spent by Spain.
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on 3
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goods
in five major
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in the year 2002.

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that all the
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countries
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most if their money on Food/Drinks/
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Tabacco
while the least
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amount
went to Leisure/Education.
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, Turkish were more attracted to consume these items whereas Swedish
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showed
less attention to these categories.

32. 14% national consumer
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expenditure
went to Food /Drinks/Tobacco in Turkey in 2002, which was the highest percentage
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shows
on the table. Irish consumer
also
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spent
a noticeable
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on the item at 28. 91%
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the second highest
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expenditure)
. Ireland and Turkey,
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only
2. 21% and 4. 35%
respectively
on Leisure/Education.

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, all the five
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countries
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almost similar
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amount
on Clothing/Footwear.
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, Italy, Spain and Sweden consumed almost same
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amount
of Food/Drinks/
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Tobacc
. The lowest
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expenditure
by any
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year was on Leisure/Education at 1. 98%,
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spent
by Spain.
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IELTS academic The table gives information on consumer spending on five different items in five different countries in 2002.

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