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the graph below shows the number of car manufactured in Japan, the UK, the USA, and China from 2020 to 2035

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The line graph illustrates the quantity of cars that will be manufactured in four different countries ( the UK, the USA, Japan, China) over a period of 15 years between 2020 and 2035. Overall, the vast majority of cars made in the UK, the USA, Japan is predicted to drop drastically in 2035. By contrast, there are likely to have a slightly increasing trend in the number of car manufactured in China over a whole period. Car manufactured in Japan will be the leading car maker in 2020 at 350, 000 car that is expected to increase slightly in 2025, will be decreased dramatically to 100, 000 cars in 2035, a drop of almost 300, 000 cars. The car production in USA will decrease sharply from 300, 000 to just over a few thousand of car production. The same trend can be seen that we look at the production of car manufactured in UK. The figure for UK car manufacturing is expected to drop drastically to 50, 000 cars. On the other hand, China, which there is the lowest quantity of car production in 2020 at 100, 000 cars, is likely to be a constanly increasing trend over a whole the period shown. The number of car that will be manufactured in China is estimated to overtake the other three countries as the leading country in the field of car production
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the UK, the USA, Japan, China)
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maker in 2020 at 350, 000
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in 2035, a drop of almost 300, 000
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in 2020 at 100, 000
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