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Subject: your info re market developments in Baltic States

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Thanks for the information about market changes in the Baltic States, the graphs about expected demand for consumer products very useful. Would you be interested in giving a presentation at our Head Office on the whole political and economic background in the region? As we may be making some large investment there soon. Thanks for your help during the conference on the future of the airline industry. While I was there, I meet your UK sales team, they are a wonderful team. There are plans to bring some of the UK staff over her to Dubai to see how we run the office. I look forward to seeing you then
Thanks for the information about market
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in the Baltic States, the graphs about
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demand for consumer products
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useful. Would you
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in giving a presentation at our Head Office
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political and economic background in the region?
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we may be making
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large investment there
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Thanks for your
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help
during the conference on the future of the airline industry. While I was there, I
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meet
your UK sales team, they are a wonderful team. There are plans to bring
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some of the
UK staff over her to Dubai to
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see
how we run the office. I look forward to seeing you
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IELTS academic Subject: your info re market developments in Baltic States

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