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Decribe hospital in 2007 and 2010

Decribe hospital in 2007 and 2010 pLrm2
The two maps illustrate changes to the road system surrounded a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. Overall, it can be easily seen that the authority made a number of improvements and new facilities during this period. In 2010, the Hospital road was upgraded, and two new roundabouts were placed at both ends of this road to reduce the risk of accidents at two intersections. In addition, there were six minor bus stops on Hospital road, whereas now they were combined into one large bus station located to the left of that road. The new bus station was linked to two roundabouts. In 2007, there was only one car park for both staff and public which was beyond old bus stops now it was for staff, and a new public car park was constructed on the east side of the hospital, which helps to increase the capacity of parking. The Ring road surrounded the hospital and the City road remained unchanged.
The two maps illustrate
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changes
to the
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road
system surrounded a city
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hospital
between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be
easily
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seen
that the authority made a number of improvements and
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new
facilities during this period.

In 2010, the
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Hospital
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road
was upgraded
, and two
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new
roundabouts
were placed
at both ends of this
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road
to
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reduce
the
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risk
of accidents at two intersections.
In addition
, there were six minor bus
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stops
on
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Hospital
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road
, whereas
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now
they
were combined
into one large bus station located to the
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left
of that
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road
. The
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new
bus station
was linked
to two roundabouts. In 2007, there was
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only
one car park for both staff and public which was beyond
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old
bus
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stops
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now
it was for staff, and a
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new
public car park
was constructed
on the east side of the
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hospital
, which
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helps
to increase the capacity of parking. The Ring
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road
surrounded the
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hospital
and the City
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road
remained unchanged.
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IELTS academic Decribe hospital in 2007 and 2010

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161 words
6.0
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