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Number of visitors per month

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The line graph above illustrated the number of 3 London museums visitors between June and September 2013. We could see clearly that the British Museum was having up and down like it is illustrated in June, which has 600, 000 visitors, and hit about 750, 000 visitors in July. British Museum visitors experienced a sharp drop after hitting the title highest visitors in July. In comparison, in August visitors decreased about 250, 000 and they got back at the top in September. The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. In the other hand, Science Museum was having the lowest enthusiast where they only had about 300, 000 visitors in August and rose in September which they were receiving 150, 000 more visitors. The number of Science Museum visitors had in September was close to the Natural History Museum vistor which they had about almost 500, 000 visitors. The Natural History Museum was also having up and down as well as the British Museum.

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comparisons where relevant.

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