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The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Writing Sample

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. PNWp

The given line graph gives information about how many books people read in Burnaby Public Library between 2011 and 2014 It is clear from the data that in 2011, women readers were more than men readers with approximately 5000 members. There was an upward tendency seen in the women readers till 2013 where the number of members reached almost 9000. However, from 2013 onwards female readers started to decline gradually and came down to 7000 in 2014. On the other hand in 2011, Male readers were only 3000. The number moderately increased and in 2012 there were 4000 readers. Furthermore, the number skyrocketed and in 2014 it touched 14000 readers. Overall, in 2014 number of male readers was higher than female readers.

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given
 line graph gives information about how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 books This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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Burnaby
 Public Library between 2011 and 2014

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the data that in 2011, women readers were more than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 readers with approximately 5000 members. There was an upward tendency This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the women readers till 2013 where the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of members reached almost 9000. However
, from 2013 onwards female readers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to decline gradually
 and came down to 7000 in 2014.

On the other hand
 in 2011, Male readers were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 3000. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
moderately
 increased and in 2012 there were 4000 readers. Furthermore
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 skyrocketed and in 2014 it touched 14000 readers.

Overall
, in 2014 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of male readers was higher than female readers. 