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The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening. ) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see. a5V9

This diagram illustrates information about the amount of time spent on non-salary work weekly that has done separated by gender. From a first glance, the graph points out that married women spend their time on unpaid duty more than married men. Also, the graph tells that the more children she has, the more time women lose their time as labor without payment. On the contrary, married men become freer when they have more children. Finally, He must stay focus on this activity approximately 30 hours less than their spouse while the difference between him and his partner is only probably 15 hours used when they live without children. Therefore, by the pattern present on the diagram, women utilize her time doing duty without receiving interest more than her husband whether they are an only couple or have they incest to look after.

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