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The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008.

The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. Q1QK
The bar chart illustrates three different method of waste disposal (landfill, burning and dumping in sea) in European country over the 4 years period of time. Unit is given in million tonnes. From the cursory glance, it can be observed that the most used method for waste disposal was landfill in year 2005 and 2006. To begin with, in 2005, 2000 million tonnes waste was dispose by the landfill while 1600 million tonnes in 2006 used same category for garbage disposal. In contrast to this, by landfill method in 2008, 1200 million tonnes waste disposed. 900 million tonnes waste was throw away by burn method in 2005 whereas in 2006, just under 1200 million tonnes waste discard by burning method. On he other hand, by using similar method nearly 900 million tonnes garbage throw out in 2008. Furthermore, almost 1200 million tonnes waste in 2005 discard by dumping in sea method likewise by using same method just above 1400 million tonnes garbage was throw away in 2006. But in 2008, same method was used for waste disposal, in which amount of waste throw away was consider as over 1600 million tonnes. overall, it can be seen from the graph that from 2005 to 2008 landfill method of waste disposal had downward trend while dumped in sea method denoted upward trend.
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