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The graph below shows the figures for population distribution in the Northwest Region for 1900-2050. v. 1

The bar graph shows the percentages of rural, suburban and urban populations in Northwest region in four different years including the projection of population distribution in 2050. Overall, the percentage of the village-living population rapidly decreased over the time and a great percentage of people will live in city areas in Northwest region in the future. According to the given column graph, more than six out of ten persons in Northwest region in 1900 lived in rural areas while one out of ten lived in suburban areas. The percentage of urban area’s population was around 35 in this same year. After 5 decades, the population circulation in this region greatly changed and more than half of the population started living in urban and suburban areas. In the year 2000, six out of ten people in this region lived in urban areas while the remaining four were in urban and rural areas. According to the projection in 2050, more than half of the North-western population will live in suburban areas while only 10% will remain in the village area. The remaining 35% of its population would settle in urban areas.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the figures for population distribution in the Northwest Region for 1900-2050. v.1

The bar graph
shows
the
percentages
of rural,
suburban
and
urban
populations
in Northwest
region
in four
different
years including the projection of
population
distribution in 2050.
Overall
, the
percentage
of the village-living
population
rapidly
decreased over the time and a great
percentage
of
people
will
live
in city
areas
in Northwest
region
in the future. According to the
given
column graph, more than six out of ten persons in Northwest
region
in 1900
lived
in rural
areas
while one out of ten
lived
in
suburban
areas
. The
percentage
of
urban
area’s
population
was around 35 in this same year. After 5 decades, the
population
circulation in this
region
greatly
changed
and more than half of the
population
started
living in
urban
and
suburban
areas
. In the year 2000, six out of ten
people
in this
region
lived
in
urban
areas
while the remaining four were in
urban
and rural
areas
. According to the projection in 2050, more than half of the North-western
population
will
live
in
suburban
areas
while
only
10% will remain in the village
area
. The remaining 35% of its
population
would settle in
urban
areas
.
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