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The graph below shows the figures for in countries between 1930and 1980

The graph below shows the figures for in countries between 1930and 1980 067L1

The given graph enlists data on the rates of imprison in five different countries in the years of 1930-1980. Thosands are taken as a measurement. Overall, It is clearly understandable that Canada had the highest amount of imprisonments among other countries, while Great Britain showed an upward trend throughout the period. It can be shown from the graph there were about 70thousand imprison rates in Australia, being higher than Great Britain. New Zealand had exactly 100 thousand people who were put in prison during the next 30years. It had experienced some fluctuations. In the year of 1950 this quantity decreased sharply to about fifty thousand. It continued to decline steadily between 1940 and 1960. Even though The United initially had lower rates than others did. It outraced Canada in 1960. The rates of Canada decreased to about 110thousand in 1960. In the year of 1960-1980 some fluctuations were observed in Canada.

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 graph enlists data on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
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 of imprison in five This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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are taken
 as a measurement.

Overall
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showed
 an upward trend throughout the period.

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rates
 in Australia, being higher than Great Britain. New Zealand had exactly 100 thousand This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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some
 fluctuations. In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 of 1950 this quantity decreased sharply
 to about fifty thousand. It continued to decline steadily
 between 1940 and 1960. “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
 The United initially
 had lower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rates
 than others did. It outraced Canada in 1960. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rates
 of Canada decreased to about 110thousand in 1960. In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 of 1960-1980 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuations were observed
 in Canada. 