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Television has a powerful influence on our culture and society. Has it affected us positively or negatively in terms of society's cultural development ?

Television has a powerful influence on our culture and society. Has it affected us positively or negatively in terms of society's cultural development? k5aAe
A time was there when Television was known as an “Idiot Box”. Many people believe that watching a television has left a negative influence on the civilization and our customs. Below I would indicate certain points which would rather give an idea about its negative or positive impact. Mentioning the first few notes, it is obvious to see that how television and its shows are being accepted by most of the people in the society. Furthermore, various shows keep everyone updated and engaged such as live news channels, sport channels, cartoons, and daily soaps. Moreover, certain shows help to grasp the knowledge as well as some interesting skills to learn for a life. By learning cooking from a kitchen show and watching spiritual shows, housewives and elderly people are spending their valuable time, respectively. Highlighting the other side of the coin; however, eating together on a dining table is a less into culture and watching TV on different time based on the schedule is a trend so the quality time with family is being compromised in most of the cases. There are few TV shows and episodes which keep people involved and lost at the same time. For instance, many television episodes are based on the crime and thrilling stories which can significantly change the mindset of a teenager and can also help a criminal to think of something different. Therefore, the “Idiot Box” is no longer an idiot, only if it can be used in a right direction. I partially agree with the side of having its negative and positive side on our society.
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Mentioning the
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television
and its
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are being
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accepted
by most of the
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people
in the society.
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shows
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keep
everyone updated and engaged such as
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live
news channels, sport channels, cartoons, and daily soaps.
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shows
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help
to grasp the knowledge
as well
as
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some
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to learn for a life. By learning cooking from a kitchen
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and watching spiritual
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shows
, housewives and elderly
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,
respectively
.

Highlighting the other side of the coin;
however
, eating together on a dining table is a less into culture and watching TV on
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time
based on the schedule is a trend
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the quality
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with family is
being compromised
in most of the cases. There are few TV
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shows
and episodes which
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keep
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people
involved and lost at the same
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.
For instance
,
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many
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television
episodes
are based
on the crime and thrilling stories which can
significantly
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change
the mindset of a
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teenager
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help
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different
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Therefore
, the “Idiot Box” is no longer an idiot,
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only
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IELTS academic Television has a powerful influence on our culture and society. Has it affected us positively or negatively in terms of society's cultural development?

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