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The graph below shows the different reasons of two groups of students to choose Dorrifod University. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the different reasons of two groups of students to choose Dorrifod University. WBO5
The given polyline graph illustrates the information about various causes of two age groups for choosing Dorrifod University. Overall, it is clear that bother groups preferred Dorrifod University because of proximity to their residential area. It can be noted that both age groups have similarities and differences for studying in university. To begin with, 36% and 39%of students from 18-24 and above 25 age group enrolled in this University respectively for the closeness to home. It is interesting to note that the proportion of students of young age gave importance to industrial aspect is only 4%; however, the equivalent figure for 25 years old is four times more than young ones. Course offered is primary reason for young ones who accounted for 35%which is 11 %more than adults. Probing further, there are 9%of students aged between 18 to 24 who considered the opportunity to study abroad important as part of course, the portion of adults was only 3%. In respect of reputation of teaching staff 2%and 1%enroll from young age group and adulthood. Surprisingly, for facilities on campus, the figure of young ones is higher (14%)than adults (2%).
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graph illustrates the information about various causes of two
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age
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for choosing
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Dorrifod
University.

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, it is
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that bother
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preferred
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Dorrifod
University
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because
of proximity to their residential area. It can
be noted
that both
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age
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groups
have similarities and differences for studying in university.

To
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begin
with, 36% and 39%of students from 18-24 and above 25
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age
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enrolled in this University
respectively
for the closeness to home. It is interesting to note that the proportion of students of
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young
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age
gave importance to industrial aspect is
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only
4%;
however
, the equivalent figure for 25 years
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is four times more than
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young
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. Course offered is primary reason for
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young
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who accounted for 35%which is 11
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%more
than adults.

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further
, there are 9%of students aged
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between 18 to 24
who considered the opportunity to study abroad
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important
as part
of course
, the portion of adults was
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only
3%. In respect of reputation of teaching staff 2%and 1%enroll from
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young
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and adulthood.
Surprisingly
, for facilities on campus, the figure of
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is higher (14%)than adults (2%).
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the different reasons of two groups of students to choose Dorrifod University.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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