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The diagram shows the present and in future water supply system in Australia.

The diagram shows the present and in future water supply system in Australia. J1jB
The illustration depicts the Australia's current and the possible water supply system in the future. Overall, the present water supply system of Australia has a facility called water treatment plant. To supply clean water, this treatment plant will treat waste water coming from the different places and those stored in the dam. In details, the current water supply has a storage called dam, which stored pure and waste water. Then, the pure or clean water stored in the dam has been distributed to different facilities like households, factories, shops and all cities in Australia. However, the waste water from these places, as well as the one stored in dam are being directed to the water treatment plant, From there, waste water will undergo treatment to produce clean water for everyone. Furthermore, storm water is being collected in different areas such as in the households, in factories, shops and around Australia's cities. This storm water flow naturally to the river.
The illustration depicts the Australia's
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system in the future.

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water
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supply
system of Australia has a facility called
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water
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treatment
plant. To
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supply
clean
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water
, this
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treatment
plant will treat
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waste
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water
coming from the
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different
places and those stored in the dam.

In
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details
, the
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water
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supply
has a storage called dam, which stored pure and
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waste
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water
. Then, the pure or clean
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water
stored in the dam has
been distributed
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different
facilities like households, factories, shops and all cities in Australia.
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waste
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water
from these places,
as well
as the one stored in dam are
being directed
to the
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water
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treatment
plant, From there,
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waste
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water
will undergo
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treatment
to produce clean
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water
for everyone.

Furthermore
, storm
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water
is
being collected
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different
areas such as in the households, in factories, shops and around Australia's cities. This storm
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water
flow
naturally
to the river.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the present and in future water supply system in Australia.

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6.5
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