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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. wGRr
The bar chart represents Japan's population trends from 1950 to 2055, while the table illustrates the population in millions and percentage of people who aged 65 years or above in the 4 years period. Overall, it is noticeable that population in 2005 have the largest number of Japan's residents and have the least in 1950. Moreover, percentage of citizens who aged 65 years old or over are predicted to increase over time, while the number of elderly are highest in 2035. Focusing on the bar chart, the data reveals that in 1950, Japan has the least amount of people, which is 84. 1 millions. In addition, the number of residents are gradually increasing and reach a peak at 127. 8. million in 2005. However, the population is slightly decrease during 10 years period and fluctuated decreasing in the year 2035 and 2055, which is from 110 millions and 89. 9 millions respectively. Turning to the table, proportion of senior people to the total of population are rapidly increasing from 4. 9% in 1950 to 20% in 2005. Moreover, the percentage of elderly are doubled over the next 50 years period. Even though are portion of old people are increasing over time, the population have the most elderly in 2035, which is 37. 2 millions, and decreasing
The bar chart represents Japan's
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population
trends from 1950 to 2055, while the table illustrates the
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population
in
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millions
and percentage of
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people
who aged 65 years or above in the 4 years period.

Overall
, it is noticeable that
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population
in 2005 have the largest number of Japan's residents and have the least in 1950.
Moreover
, percentage of citizens who aged 65 years
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old
or
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are predicted
to increase
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time, while the number of elderly are highest in 2035.

Focusing on the bar chart, the data reveals that in 1950, Japan has the least amount of
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people
, which is 84. 1
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millions
.
In addition
, the number of residents are
gradually
increasing and reach a peak at 127. 8.
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million
in 2005.
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is
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decrease
during 10 years period and fluctuated decreasing in the
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2035 and 2055, which is from 110
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millions
and 89. 9
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millions
respectively
.

Turning to the table, proportion of senior
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people
to the total of
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population
are
rapidly
increasing from 4. 9% in 1950 to 20% in 2005.
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, the percentage of elderly
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the
next
50 years period.
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are increasing
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time, the
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have the most elderly in 2035, which is 37. 2
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, and decreasing
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IELTS academic The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

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