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The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveyed asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveyed asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. l6p9
The table provides information on how the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum has changed during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts gives information about the results of surveys about the satisfaction of visitors about their experience at Ashdown Museum during the same two periods. There is a positive correlation between the number of visitors and the changes in visitor’s satisfaction. There were 74, 000 visitors a year before the refurbishment of Ashdown Museum. In the year after refurbishment, 92, 000 people visited at this place, which significantly increased. Almost 20, 000 more people came. In terms of visitor satisfaction of this museum, a year before of remodeling in their facility, the percentage of visitors who satisfied and very satisfied in their visiting is altogether 45%. Meanwhile, it is 50% of visitors had dissatisfied or very dissatisfied experience, which is slightly more percentage than visitors who had satisfied time. A year after the refurbishment, the results dramatically changed. The very satisfied was doubled from 15% to 35%. In total who had more than satisfied experience all comes to 75%. On the other hand, the percentage of people dissatisfied decreased to more than half, from 40% to 15%. The people who did not respond remains same at 5%. Overall, the data illustrates that the refurbishment of Ashdown Museum resulted not only in increasing the number of visitors but also successfully enabling to provide better experiences to the visitors.
The table provides information on how the numbers of
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In terms of
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did not respond remains same at 5%.

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IELTS academic The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveyed asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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