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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from in one European city 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from in one European city 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. qkyEP
The bar chart segment the percentage in a European city who use on of transportation (train, car, tube, and bus) in their daily travelling mode. The popularity of bus transportation in 1960 was overtaken by car in the 2000. In 1960 the bus was the most famous med of travel accounting for 38% of all modes. Train and bus become equally popular with 27% of mode of transport. From 1960 to 2000, there was a significant difference in commuters between these four way of travel Iran users are increased by 4%, tube users by 2% and bus by 17% on the other hand car users has increased by 30%. In summary, the bus was the most popular mode in 1960 then, tube and train in 1980 and finally, car in 2000.
The bar chart segment the percentage in a European city who
use
on of transportation (train,
car
, tube, and bus) in their daily travelling mode.

The popularity of bus transportation in 1960
was overtaken
by
car
in the 2000. In 1960 the bus was the most
famous
med of travel accounting for 38% of all modes. Train and bus become
equally
popular with 27% of mode of transport.

From 1960 to 2000, there was a significant difference in commuters between these four way of travel Iran users
are increased
by 4%, tube users by 2% and bus by 17%
on the other hand
car
users has increased by 30%.

In summary, the bus was the most popular mode in 1960 then, tube and train in 1980 and
finally
,
car
in 2000.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from in one European city 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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