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The pie chart gives information on marketing budget (2014) of some company . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart gives information on marketing budget (2014) of some company. GrbY2
The pie chart depicts the data on Marketing Budget namely business listings, email, website, SEO, direct mail, text /sms, social, ppc, video of some company in the year 2014. Overall, it can be seen that the highest part was covered by email and the least part was of website. To begin with, business listings covered only 10 % respectively which was slightly more than email. The part of website and SEO was similar that is 15 %. However, direct mail contributes only 10 % which was approximately half to text / sms (6%). In addition, social marketing budget had a part of 7 % in 2014 whereas, ppc had the highest part among all in the same year respectively. Video covered a very small number (5%) out of the total.
The pie chart depicts the data on Marketing Budget
namely
business listings, email, website, SEO, direct mail, text /
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sms
, social,
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ppc
, video of
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company
in the year 2014.
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, it can be
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seen
that the highest
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part
was covered
by email and the least
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part
was of website. To
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begin
with, business listings covered
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only
10 %
respectively
which was
slightly
more than email. The
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part
of website and SEO was similar
that is
15 %.
However
, direct mail contributes
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only
10 % which was approximately half to text /
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sms
(6%).
In addition
, social marketing budget had a
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part
of 7 % in 2014 whereas,
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ppc
had the highest
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part
among all in the same year
respectively
. Video covered a
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very
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small
number (5%) out of the total.
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IELTS academic The pie chart gives information on marketing budget (2014) of some company.

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