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smoked foods are popular worldwide because of their special Grewal and their long live the diagram below shows the structure of a smokery and how it is used.

smoked foods are popular worldwide because of their special Grewal and their long live the diagram below shows the structure of a smokery and how it is used. APqdx
The rendered diagram reveals information about the home smoker as well as how it is consumed. It can be seen that there are mainly three sections are involved in this process. At the first glance, it is evident that in the first part, it is an empty underground section with lid on top at ground level. Then, air is allowed to flow in the first machine with opening the lid. In the next step, air is started to pass from the beginning part of the machine to second machine including fire is burning with the help of logs from the lid on top. After that, heat pass through the narrow pipe and it lead to box along with keep the food inside the box for cooking. The heat coming from the second machine cooks the food in box. Overall, it is analyzed that all the steps are necessary an omission of a single step can halt the entire process.
The rendered diagram reveals information about the home smoker
as well
as how it
is consumed
. It can be
seen
that there are
mainly
three sections
are involved
in this process.

At the
first
glance, it is evident that in the
first
part, it is an empty underground section with lid on top at ground level. Then, air is
allowed
to flow in the
first
machine
with opening the lid. In the
next
step, air is
started
to pass from the beginning part of the
machine
to second
machine
including fire is burning with the
help
of logs from the lid on top.

After that, heat pass through the narrow pipe and it
lead
to box along with
keep
the food inside the box for cooking. The heat coming from the second
machine
cooks the food in box.

Overall
, it
is analyzed
that all the steps are necessary an omission of a single step can halt the entire process.
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IELTS academic smoked foods are popular worldwide because of their special Grewal and their long live the diagram below shows the structure of a smokery and how it is used.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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