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The given line graph depicts the proportion of Australian teenagers who consumed fast food in Pizza, Fish and Chips, and Hamburgers annually from 1975 to 2000.

The given line graph depicts the proportion of Australian teenagers who consumed fast food in Pizza, Fish and Chips, and Hamburgers annually from 1975 to 2000. kb1V2

The given line graph depicts the proportion of Australian teenagers who consumed fast food in Pizza, Fish and Chips, and Hamburgers annually from 1975 to 2000. Overall, it can be easily seen that there are considerable upward trends in the consumption of Pizza and hamburgers. Otherwise, although Fish and Chips considered the highest figure in 1975, it experienced a substantial downward trend at the end of the period. To begin with, Hamburgers registered approximately 10 times in the first period, in which the number increased sharply to 60times in the next 5 years. in 1985, the consumed percentage of Hambergurs reached a peak of over 85 times, after that, it climbed significantly to exactly 100 percent in 1995, and remained stable the figure until 2000. According to Pizza, in 1975, the number accounted for below 10%, at which point it rose remarkably to about 30 times in a decade. In the next 10 years, the figure of the consumption of Hamburgers soared to a decent number, which was over 80 times in 1995, which after this figure remained unchanged at the end of the period. In contrast, the number of times eaten Fish and Chips was accurately 100 times in the first year. In 1985, After it underwent a fluctuated number of consumed fast food, which was under 100 times, it continued an enormous fall in the time consumption, which was approximately 50 times in the next 15 years. At the end of the period, the number declined moderately to 38 times.

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