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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the different home activities among young children in four different countries. Write a report for a university lecturer and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the different home activities among young children in four different countries. Write a report for a university lecturer and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 7LeLn
The bar chart above illustrates the percentage of the most popular activities among children in four countries wich are Malaysia, China, Nigeria and Sundan. Overall, it can be clearly said that the most popular activity among children among these four nations is definitely computer games. Reading is the least popular activity in every single of these nations. Malaysia and China are both Asian countries. A half a the Malasian child plays video games a a leisure. 40% Chinese childs plays video games as a leisure. 30% of childs of both these Asian nations watches television. 25% of asian countries youth plays board games as a leisure activity as well. And finally 20% of Malaysian kids reads books as a leisure compared to Chinese childs who reads 5 percent less than Malaysian ones. On the other hand Nigeria and Sudan, both African countries have 60% and 50% of their youth who plays video games as a leisure consecutively. 30% of kids o both of these nations watch television as a leisure activity. 20% Of Nigerian youth plays board games as a leisure wichi s 10% less than Sudan’s one. And finally both 10% of these two African country’s childs read book as a leisure
The bar chart above illustrates the percentage of the most popular
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activities
among children in four
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countries
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wich
are Malaysia, China, Nigeria and
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Sundan
.
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, it can be
clearly
said that the most popular
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activity
among children among these four nations is definitely computer
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games
. Reading is the least popular
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activity
in every single of these nations.

Malaysia and China are both Asian
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countries
. A half
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a the
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Malasian
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child
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plays
video
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games
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a a
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leisure
. 40% Chinese childs
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plays
video
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games
as a
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leisure
. 30% of
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childs
of both these Asian nations
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watches
television. 25% of
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asian
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countries
youth
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plays
board
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games
as a
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leisure
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activity
as well
. And
finally
20% of Malaysian kids reads books as a
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leisure
compared to Chinese
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childs
who reads 5 percent less than Malaysian ones.

On the other hand
Nigeria and Sudan, both African
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countries
have 60% and 50% of their youth who
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plays
video
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games
as a
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leisure
consecutively
. 30% of kids o both of these nations
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watch
television as a
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leisure
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activity
. 20% Of Nigerian youth
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plays
board
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games
as a
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leisure
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wichi
s 10% less than Sudan’s one. And
finally
both 10% of these two African
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country’s
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childs
read book as a
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leisure
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the different home activities among young children in four different countries. Write a report for a university lecturer and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
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