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The bar graph illustrates information about the share of magazines which was sold per person in five separate nations between 2000 and 2010 anh the sale projections for 2030.

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The bar graph illustrates information about the share of magazines which was sold per person in five separate nations between 2000 and 2010 anh the sale projections for 2030. A glance at the chart reveals that the volume of almost all magazines sold decreased, except for Country D. The most dramatic decline was seen in country A. In 2000, at around 50 magazines sold in country A and B, followed by nearly 40 magazines in country C. The figures for country D and C were lower, at under 20 magazines. Over a period of 10 years, there was a downward trend in the magazines was bought in countryA, B and C declined gradually by approximately 3 magazines whereas the figures for country D and C climbed slightly by 2 magazines. By 2030, the magazines sold per person in country A is anticipated to reduce considerably to under 40 magazines and the figures for country B, C and E will fall moderately by nearly 2 magazines. A different pattern can be seen in country D, with a rise to around 23 magazines.
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anh
the sale projections for 2030.

A glance at the chart reveals that the volume of almost all
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magazines
sold decreased,
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except for
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D. The most dramatic decline was
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A.

In 2000, at around 50
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sold in
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A and B, followed by
nearly
40
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magazines
in
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country
C. The figures for
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D and C were lower, at under 20
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magazines
. Over a period of 10 years, there was a downward trend in the
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magazines
was
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countryA
, B and C declined
gradually
by approximately 3
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magazines
whereas the figures for
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D and C climbed
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by 2 magazines.

By 2030, the
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sold per person in
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A
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to
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reduce
considerably
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magazines
and the figures for
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country
B, C and E will fall
moderately
by
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2
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. A
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IELTS academic The bar graph illustrates information about the share of magazines which was sold per person in five separate nations between 2000 and 2010 anh the sale projections for 2030.

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