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The graph below shows the differences in whest exports over three different areas.

The graph below shows the differences in whest exports over three different areas. kDxK
The given line graph depicts the information about changes in wheat exports by Australia, Canada and European Community during 1985 to 1990. It can be clearly seen that in the beginning of the period, Canada exported the highest amount of wheat which was 19 million tonnes. Then, a gradual decrease was noticed in the wheat exports till 1986. After that, rate of wheat trade increased significantly till 1988 and reached at its peak point that was 25 million tonnes. However, a sharp decline was observed by Canada in wheat exports and then it increased to 19 million tonnes in 1990. Moving towards the rest of the information, European community exported 17 million tonnes wheat in 1985 and then it followed fluctuations till 1990 and reached at 21 millions of tonnes. The lowest amount of wheat was exported by Australia from starting to ending of the period which was 15 million tonnes in 1985 and 11 million tonnes in 1990. Overall, in the end of the period, European Community exported the highest amount of wheat, however the lowest amount was exported by Australia.
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exports till 1986. After that, rate of
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trade increased
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tonnes in 1990. Moving towards the rest of the information, European community
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in 1985 and then it followed fluctuations till 1990 and reached at 21
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