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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. xA89
The image gives us the way of to monitor trustful weather reports which is collected by Australian Bureau of Meteorology and how people get these reports by media. In general, there are four steps of forecast reports which are collecting, analysing, preparing, and airing. For the collect to weather data Bureau uses three different sources. Then, they going to be able to be aired after two analysing and preparing processes. These three sources serve three different data for the create a reliable report. After all, this report processed by computers to be aired. Lastly, people can get last minute reports by several sources. When looked in detail, three unprocessed data sources are satellite creates satellite photos and radar takes that information and shows various information in its screen. Then, drifting buoy’s sensors creates a synoptic chart. These three different data sources are analysed for to create detailed report to be broadcasted. Next, all these data need to be prepared for various media which are TV, radio and recorded announcement through phones.
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analysing
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a reliable
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processed by computers to
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. When looked in detail, three unprocessed
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are satellite
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satellite photos and radar takes that information and
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