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The graph below shows the difference in wheat exports over three different areas.

The graph below shows the difference in wheat exports over three different areas. gwAO
The given line graph compares the wheat exports over three different parts of the world namely Australia, Canada and the European Community from 1985 to 1990. As is presented in the graph, the wheat export in Australia decreased over time while the export in Canada and European countries increased with some fluctuations. According to the graph, around 15 to 20 million tons of wheat was exported to Australia, Canada and the European community. This amount decreased slightly in 1986 reaching around 15 million tons and from that point, the export quantity in Australia kept on decreasing and reached just over 10 million tons in 1990. In the meantime, the amount increased sharply in Canada until 1988 and then there was a quick decline and finally, it reached around 19 million tons in 1990. Finally, the wheat export in the European Community increased gradually over the years and reached over 20 million tons in 1990.
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Australia, Canada and the European Community from 1985 to 1990. As
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wheat
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export
in Australia decreased
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time while the
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export
in Canada and European countries increased with
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fluctuations.

According to the graph, around 15 to 20
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was exported
to Australia, Canada and the European community. This amount decreased
slightly
in 1986 reaching around 15
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million
tons and from that point, the
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export
quantity in Australia
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on decreasing and reached
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10
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million
tons in 1990. In the meantime, the amount increased
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in Canada until 1988 and then there was a quick decline and
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, it reached around 19
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million
tons in 1990.
Finally
, the
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wheat
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export
in the European Community increased
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the difference in wheat exports over three different areas.

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