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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. 8kdl
The given chart illustrates the proportion of people donating their money to charity in England on five differents age ranges in year 1990 and 2010. Overall, it can be noticeable that 36-50 years old people tend to giving their money the most in 1990 while the 51-65 years old people take the vast majority in donation in 2010. In 1990, the number of people donating money to charity is greatest among 36-50 years old people at about 42% followed by people in an age range of 51-65 which take 35%. Interestingly, people in age range of 26-35 and over 65 years old reach around the same percentages, while 18-25 years old takes the least at 17%. Moving on to the year 2010, it is apparent that people with an age range of 51-65 spend their money for donation the most with the proportion of 39. In addition, it is remarkable that 36-50 years old people and over 65 years old people have the same proportion at 35%. Meanwhile, people with 26-35 years old and 18-25 years old have the lower percentage at just under 25% and about 7% respectively.
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to charity in England on five differents
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age
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ranges
in
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1990 and 2010.
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tend to giving their
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the most in 1990 while the 51-65 years
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take the vast majority in donation in 2010.

In 1990, the number of
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donating
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to charity is greatest among 36-50 years
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at about 42% followed by
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in an
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of 51-65 which take 35%.
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of 26-35 and over 65 years
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reach around the same percentages, while 18-25 years
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takes the least at 17%.

Moving on to the
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2010, it is apparent that
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of 51-65 spend their
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for donation the most with the proportion of 39.
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, it is remarkable that 36-50 years
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and over 65 years
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have the same proportion at 35%. Meanwhile,
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with 26-35 years
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and 18-25 years
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have the lower percentage at
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under 25% and about 7%
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

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