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the graph below shows the differences in wheat export over three different areas. White a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.

The line charts compares 2 different areas for exporting wheat over 5 years in 1985-1990. Overall, there were some variations in the 3 regions where Canada and European countries experienced an upward trend, the export in Australia fell steadily. As clearly the graph shows, Australia's export started at 15 million tons by 1985 followed by a little increase to approximately 16 million tons in 1986. Concerning the export in Canada, it contained 19 million tons by 1985. However, it declined steadily steadily in `1986, but then the export soared in 1987 and 1988 at 21 and 25 million tons, respectively. But the exports witnessed dropped suddenly below 15 million tons by 1989. Afterwards, the figure growth to just under 20 million tons in 5 years later. By contrast, The countries in European exhibited an increase over 6 years period. By 1985 stood at about 17 million tons were shipped, but the amount fell to around 14 million tons in 1986. However, the exports increased to exactly 15 million tons in 1987 and 1988 before witnessing increased substantially to 19 and 21 million tons in 1989 and 1990, respectively.
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areas for exporting wheat over 5 years in 1985-1990.

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, there were
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variations in the 3 regions where Canada and European countries experienced an upward trend, the
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in Australia fell
steadily
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tons by 1985 followed by a
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increase to approximately 16
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million
tons in 1986. Concerning the
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in Canada, it contained 19
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tons by 1985.
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steadily
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then the
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soared in 1987 and 1988 at 21 and 25
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witnessed dropped
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tons by 1989. Afterwards, the figure growth to
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under 20
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tons in 5 years later.

By contrast, The countries in European exhibited an increase over 6 years period. By 1985 stood at about 17
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were shipped
,
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the amount fell to around 14
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tons in 1986.
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, the
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exports
increased to exactly 15
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tons in 1987 and 1988
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witnessing increased
substantially
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IELTS academic the graph below shows the differences in wheat export over three different areas. White a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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188 words
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