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In the name of God The information about percentage of radio and TV audience who are over 4 years old, during a day in Brittanie is illustrated by line chart below. The chart line time is from 6am to tomorrow 6am. People prefer listen to radio in the morning on the contrary, the number of TV viewers rise during the evening, and most of the people sleep during the night. Also both of the line chart fluctuate wildly. In the morning the number of people who listen to the radio fluctuate from just under 10 percent to the highest number about one third at 9am then increased slightly until the end of the day. In addition, the majority of audience changed at 1pm and they watch TV more. This trend continues till 9pm and the percentage of TV viewers reach to the highest at 50%. After that the whole number of audiences reduced until the midnight and the number and it continues again from 2am. The percentages of both TV viewer and who listen to the radio change incredibly during the day couple of times. At first both of them experience a huge increase in figure of audience respectively about one half and 30% in less than 12 hours, then the whole number of adenines falls about 0 at midnight
In the name of God

The information about percentage of
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radio
and TV
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audience
who are over 4 years
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old
, during a day in Brittanie
is illustrated
by line chart below. The chart line time is from 6am to tomorrow 6am.

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People
prefer listen to
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radio
in the morning
on the contrary
, the
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number
of TV viewers rise during the evening, and most of the
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people
sleep during the night.
Also
both of the line chart fluctuate
wildly
.

In the morning the
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number
of
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people
who listen to the
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radio
fluctuate from
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just
under 10 percent to the highest
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number
about one third at 9am then increased
slightly
until the
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end
of the day.
In addition
, the majority of
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audience
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changed
at 1pm and they
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watch
TV more. This trend continues till 9pm and the percentage of TV viewers reach to the highest at 50%. After that the whole
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number
of
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audiences
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reduced
until the midnight and the
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number
and it continues again from 2am.

The percentages of both TV viewer and who listen to the
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radio
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change
incredibly
during the day couple of times. At
first
both of them experience a huge increase in figure of
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audience
respectively
about one half and 30% in less than 12 hours, then the whole
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number
of adenines falls about 0 at midnight
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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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