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The charts below shows the percentage is of students joining north west University.

The charts illustrate the proportion of students (students by faculty and non-US arts students) attending the University North West. It is immediately obvious that there are significant contrasts between these two students’ categories. It is crystal clear that, majority of students fond to focus on arts faculty around 23%. Furthermore, both science and computing faculties had similar quantity of students around 22%. Surprisingly, 9% of students attend for the engineering faculty. It is evident that medicine faculty is the least favorite faculty among the students around 5% and there are 6% of students in law faculty as well. Moreover, merely 2% of African students tend to join the arts faculty, and on the other hand, majority of South American students (79%) love to do arts in the North West University. Interestingly, there are notable number of European students prefer to join the arts faculty around 21%. Approximately same amount of Australian and Asian students love to enter to the arts faculty around 4% and 6%, respectively.
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