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Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs. 3VWl
The graph presents four famous British public figures' recognition through their photographs between four different age groups. Overall, the queen and the prime minister are more identifiable than the Chancellor and London's mayor. The queen is the most recognizable public figure among all age groups with nearly 100% apart from about 5% in the age group 0-20 years who could not identify the queen from her portrait. The prime minister, who is distinguishable between 90% between 41 and 60, came to the second after the queen. However, he is variably recognizable amongst other age groups ranging from 50% to 80%. The British Chancellor, and London's mayor, according to the survey, are not discernable enough compared to the queen. The Chancellor is more identifiable between two-thirds of British people over the age of 40, whereas less than 30% of citizens below the age of 40 were able to figure him out through his shot. London's mayor is more known to middle-aged individuals between 21-60 years old. Six out of ten managed to distinguish his image, while only two out ten below their twentieth and four out ten of less than 40 years old were capable of recognizing him.
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British public figures' recognition through their photographs between four
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and the prime minister are more identifiable than the Chancellor and London's mayor.

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is the most recognizable public figure among all
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groups with
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group 0-20 years who could not identify the
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from her portrait. The prime minister, who is distinguishable between 90% between 41 and 60, came to the second after the
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groups ranging from 50% to 80%.

The British Chancellor, and London's mayor, according to the survey, are not
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compared to the
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. The Chancellor is more identifiable between two-thirds of British
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of 40, whereas less than 30% of citizens below the
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of 40 were able to figure him out through his shot. London's mayor is more known to middle-aged individuals between 21-60 years
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. Six out of ten managed to distinguish his image, while
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were capable of recognizing him.
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IELTS academic Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.

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4 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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