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The graph below shows the difference in wheat exports over three different areas.

The graph below shows the difference in wheat exports over three different areas. RjyM
The given line graph enumerates the data on how wheat exportation distinguished in three areas over the period from 1985 to 1990. All in all, European community was the high-pitched area which illustrated a dramatic fluctuation however, Australia experienced an upward trend once and positioned in the lowest stage. In 1995, Canada started its movement with about 20 millions of tones and demonstrated a swift surge reaching the highest point (25) in the year of 1988 before falling slightly in 1986 being almost same with trends of Australia. By the time figure situated the second on wheat export sector a significant drop was witnessed in the following year (1989) and depicted the same proportion as its previous numbers at the end. Whereas, 15 millions of tones was the initial point in Australia and till 1990 the numbers sunk gradually and non-stoppingly through showing nearly 10 tones (in millions) in 1990 but experienced a tedious rise in 1986. Moreover, the figure for European community staged first in the chart by reaching less than 23 in 1990, beginning to climb from 15 millions in 1988 before fluctuating and remaining ceaselessly in 1986 and 1988 respectively.
The
given
line graph enumerates the data on how wheat exportation distinguished in three areas over the period from 1985 to 1990.

All in all, European community was the high-pitched area which illustrated a dramatic fluctuation
however
, Australia experienced an upward trend once and positioned in the lowest stage.

In 1995, Canada
started
its movement with about 20
millions
of tones and demonstrated a swift surge reaching the highest point (25) in the year of 1988
before
falling
slightly
in 1986 being almost same with trends of Australia. By the time figure situated the second on wheat export sector a significant drop
was witnessed
in the following year (1989) and depicted the same proportion as its previous numbers at the
end
.

Whereas, 15
millions
of tones was the initial point in Australia and till 1990 the numbers sunk
gradually
and non-
stoppingly
through showing
nearly
10 tones (in
millions)
in 1990
but
experienced a tedious rise in 1986.
Moreover
, the figure for European community staged
first
in the chart by reaching less than 23 in 1990, beginning to climb from 15
millions
in 1988
before
fluctuating and remaining
ceaselessly
in 1986 and 1988
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the difference in wheat exports over three different areas.

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