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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. rQYm
The former poly graph illustrates the data about the water consumption across the global while in the later table graph depicits the consumption of water in the two different country namely Congo and Brazil during the period of 2000. The data has been calibrated into numeric formOverall, the maximum water used in agriculture purpose in comparison to industrial and domestic sector and agriculture shows upward trend through out the given period whereas the maximum usuage of water in Brazil. Turning towards the details, the maximum usuage of water in 1900 which was recorded as 1900 as compared to industrial and domestic sector it was almost negligble over the period of 1950 while in agriculture sector through the consumption of water bargeoned at snail pace over the period of four year from 1910 to 1940. In the year of 1960 the agriculture steply increase it almost 1500 it increase considerably and reach to 3000 in year of 2000 however the industrial sector slightly incresead in the year of 2000 it was accounted for approximately 900 and domestic sector shows the downward trend throughout the period. Shedding line on the remaining data, the was of maximum population as compared to Congo it was 176 millions and the population of Congo was 5. 2 millions the water used for irrigated land in two countries was almost 26500 and 100 respectively whereas the water consumption of both countries in Brazil it was recorded as 359 and in Congo it was almost 8
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poly
graph illustrates the data about the
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consumption
across the global while in the later table graph
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depicits
the
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consumption
of
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water
in the two
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different
country
namely
Congo and Brazil during the
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period
of 2000. The data has
been calibrated
into numeric
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formOverall
, the maximum
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water
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used
in
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agriculture
purpose
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sector
and
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agriculture
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shows
upward trend
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whereas the maximum
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usuage
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in Brazil. Turning towards the
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details
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negligble
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bargeoned
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from 1910 to 1940. In the
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steply
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1500 it
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the industrial
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slightly
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of 2000 it
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sector
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shows
the downward trend throughout the
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. Shedding line on the remaining data, the was of maximum population as compared to Congo it was 176 millions and the population of Congo was 5. 2 millions the
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water
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used
for irrigated land in two countries was
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almost
26500 and 100
respectively
whereas the
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water
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of both countries in Brazil it
was recorded
as 359 and in Congo it was
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IELTS academic The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

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