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The graph below shows the contribution to different sectors of Indian economy in 1950,1970 and 1990. Summarise the information, by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The graph below shows the contribution to different sectors of Indian economy in 1950, 1970 and 1990. 7a0x3
The bar graph depicts the different sectors contributed to Indian economy in the year 1950, 1960 and 1970. Where, the sectors are Industries, self employment, Service sector and Agriculture. Industries economy in the year 1950 was 20%, were it rose to 27% in 1970 and fell to 17% in 1990 which has sudden dip of 10% in 20years. Self employment economy was least among all the sectors in the year 1950, It has increased to 25% from 7% which is a major boom in 1970, and it followed the same rise and hiked to 37% in 1990 stood as a greatest sector in Contribution. Although, Service sector had 27% of economy in 1950 it has decreased to 23% in 1970, has followed the same fall in 1990 to, which is just 7%. It has experienced the greatest fall between 1970 and 1990 compared to other sectors. Agriculture was the biggest sector in contributing economy in 1950which was 35%, It is also decreased to 18% in 1970 and to 10% in 1990. Overall, Industries fluctuated from 20% to 18% it was steady, although, Self employment hiked from 7% to 36% which was a major rise among all sectors, Service sector and Agriculture sector fell from a high contribution to low between 1950 and 1990.
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