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The given bar chart illustrate the proportions of divorce in two European countries (Finland, Sweden) from 2011 to 2015. These values are measured in percentages.

The given bar chart illustrate the proportions of divorce in two European countries (Finland, Sweden) from 2011 to 2015. These values are measured in percentages. E3qKM
The given bar chart illustrate the proportions of divorce in two European countries (Finland, Sweden) from 2011 to 2015. These values are measured in percentages. Overall, what stands out from the bar chart is that divorce rates increased from 2012 to 2015 in Finland. Conversely, these rates decreased from 2012 to 2015 in Sweden. In detail, nearly two fifth of people got separated from their loved one's in the year 2011 in Finland before decreasing to nearly 33% in 2012. From then on, these values increased significantly from one third to nearly 42% in 2014. Following this year, these rates were relatively same. On the other hand, divorce rates in Sweden followed an opposite trend where these proportions decreased gradually from almost two quarters in 2012 to just under 40% in 2015.
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bar chart illustrate the proportions of divorce in two European countries (Finland, Sweden) from 2011 to 2015. These values
are measured
in percentages.

Overall
, what stands out from the bar chart is that divorce
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rates
increased from 2012 to 2015 in Finland.
Conversely
, these
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rates
decreased from 2012 to 2015 in Sweden.

In detail,
nearly
two fifth of
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people
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got
separated from their
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loved
one's in the year 2011 in Finland
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before
decreasing to
nearly
33% in 2012. From then on, these values increased
significantly
from one third to
nearly
42% in 2014. Following this year, these
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rates
were
relatively
same.
On the other hand
, divorce
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rates
in Sweden followed an opposite trend where these proportions decreased
gradually
from almost two quarters in 2012 to
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just
under 40% in 2015.
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IELTS academic The given bar chart illustrate the proportions of divorce in two European countries (Finland, Sweden) from 2011 to 2015. These values are measured in percentages.

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