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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and three kinds of meat from 1979 to 2004

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and three kinds of meat from 1979 to 2004 kbDbe
The line graph details how much fish and three kinds of meat were eaten weekly per person over a period of 25 years. It is clear from the graph that the amount of chicken which consumed rose significantly whereas the intake of lamb, beef and fish shared a downward trend during this time. Furthermore, fish was the least commonly used throughout the period shown. In 1979, beef was the most eaten, each person consumed about 220 grams per week and this was even much higher than the amount of chicken (140 grams), lamb (150 grams), and fish (60 grams). Over time people preferred chicken and the consumption kept on increasing and hitting a peak of 250 grams in 2002. From that time to 2004, the average consumption of lamb declined markedly to only 60 grams per week, and similarly, fish consumption was stable during the period, around 50 grams per person per week. In contrast, chicken had overtaken beef to become the most popular kind of food.
The line graph
details
how much fish and three kinds of meat
were eaten
weekly per person over a period of 25 years. It is
clear
from the graph that the amount of chicken which consumed rose
significantly
whereas the intake of lamb, beef and fish shared a downward trend during this time.
Furthermore
, fish was the least
commonly
used
throughout the period shown.

In 1979, beef was the most eaten, each person consumed about 220
grams
per week and this was even much higher than the amount of chicken (140
grams)
, lamb (150
grams)
, and fish (60
grams)
. Over time
people
preferred chicken and the consumption
kept
on increasing and hitting a peak of 250
grams
in 2002.

From that time to 2004, the average consumption of lamb declined
markedly
to
only
60
grams
per week, and
similarly
, fish consumption was stable during the period, around 50
grams
per person per week.
In contrast
, chicken had overtaken beef to become the most popular kind of food.
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