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The given maps show changes that took place in paradise island in past and present.

The given maps show changes that took place in paradise island in past and present. VEXy3

The two maps represent the information about how Pardise island has been changed by spectacular development over the particular period of time. Overall, it could be observed that the entire island has got renovated with establishment of extra curricular areas and luxurious amenities. Although, the most of the forest area are chopped down in order to modernised paradise island. Initially, in the past, the most of the central area of paradise island covered with numerous trees, but now the greenery area has been cut down in order to make way for new construction of open restaurant, BBQ area and swimming pool. Whereas, natural spring and rocks are remained unchanged. However, at present the new cafe is opened in east side of island. Moving ahead, in yesteryear there was small path for cycle riding near to the beach side that is situated in north-west side of Paradise island, but currently there is long cycle path across the island. Furthermore, the service of pier is expanded as compared to the previous one. Similarly, this change can be also noticeable in boat facility, as with the time boat is modified into cruise ship.

The two maps represent the information about how Possible spelling mistake found.Paradise
Pardise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 by spectacular development over the particular period of time.

Overall
, it could be observed
 that the entire You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 renovated with establishment of This word is normally spelled as one.extracurricular
extra curricular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 and luxurious amenities. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, the most of the forest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
are chopped
 down in order to Possible spelling mistake. 'modernised' is British English.modernized
modernised
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Paradise Island
paradise island
.

Initially
, in the past, the most of the central You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of paradise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 covered with numerous trees, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 the greenery You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for new construction of open restaurant, BBQ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and swimming pool. Whereas, natural spring and rocks are remained
 unchanged. However
, at present the new 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
is opened
 in east side of island.

Moving ahead, in yesteryear there was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 path for cycle riding near to the beach side that is situated
 in north-west side of Paradise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
currently
 there is long cycle path across the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. Furthermore
, the service of pier is expanded
 as compared to the previous one. Similarly
, this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 can be also
 noticeable in boat facility, as with the time boat is modified
 into cruise ship. 