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Rainwater reuse program. Summarize and report the main trends seen in the graph.

Rainwater reuse program. Summarize and report the main trends seen in the graph. yxgwM
This system starts when there is rain, the slope in every roof naturally directs the rain water into the gutters, then into an underground drain pipe. A main drain pipe leading to a water treatment facility collects the rain water from all houses in the area. In the facility the water is filtered to remove contaminants like leaves, twigs and dirt. Then the filtered water is pumped and stored in giant storage tanks. This stored water is then pumped into a water treatment tank, here chemicals are added to remove any impurities that wasn't filtered by the filter, harmful dissolved gases and to disinfect the water from harmful bacteria. After letting the chemicals to purify the water for a while, the water is pumped back to the houses for domestic usage. This is an ingenious way of utilizing the rain water than just letting it to be soaked up by the ground.
This system
starts
when there is
rain
, the slope in every roof
naturally
directs the
rain
water
into the gutters, then into an underground drain pipe. A main drain pipe leading to a
water
treatment facility collects the
rain
water
from all
houses
in the area.

In the facility the
water
is filtered
to remove contaminants like
leaves
, twigs and dirt. Then the filtered
water
is pumped
and stored in giant storage tanks. This stored
water
is then pumped into a
water
treatment tank, here chemicals are
added
to remove any impurities that wasn't filtered by the filter, harmful dissolved gases and to disinfect the
water
from harmful bacteria. After letting the chemicals to purify the
water
for a while, the
water
is pumped
back to the
houses
for domestic usage. This is an ingenious way of utilizing the
rain
water
than
just
letting it to
be soaked
up by the ground.
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IELTS academic Rainwater reuse program. Summarize and report the main trends seen in the graph.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
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