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The graph below shows the change in popularity of various social media platforms. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the change in popularity of numerous social media network. The line graph compares the history os social media users between 2004 and 2018. Overall the numbers of active accounts of Myspace declined over the period whereas the number of accounts of Facebook increased In 2004 to 2010, the active accounts of Myspace increased slightly but in 2011it was drop significantly. On the other hand, Facebook active accounts rose rapidly from 100 millions account to over 2 billions within 11 years. The active accounts of Reddit, Twitter and TikTok grew stedily over time.
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in popularity of numerous social media network. The line graph compares the history
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os
social media users between 2004 and 2018.
Overall
the numbers of
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active
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accounts
of
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Myspace
declined over the period whereas the number of
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accounts
of Facebook increased

In 2004 to 2010, the
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active
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accounts
of
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Myspace
increased
slightly
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but
in 2011it was drop
significantly
.
On the other hand
, Facebook
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active
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accounts
rose
rapidly
from 100 millions
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account
to over 2 billions within 11 years. The
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active
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accounts
of Reddit, Twitter and TikTok grew
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stedily
over time.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the change in popularity of various social media platforms.

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