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The amount of misinformation on the internet has grown to become a serious threat to public wellbeing. What are the causes for the growth of misinformation on the internet? What solutions are being taken to stop the growth of misinformation on the internet.

The amount of misinformation on the internet has grown to become a serious threat to public wellbeing. What are the causes for the growth of misinformation on the internet? What solutions are being taken to stop the growth of misinformation on the internet. wKdPl
Nowadays, the number of people can access to internet have increased. Follow the development, the amount of disinformation on the internet has risen to become a serios threat to public wellbeing. There are many cause for the growth of misinformation on the internet and many solutions for this problem. The first reason is there are a lot of fake news on everywhere on the internet and social media. For example, there are lots of informations about Corona virus on Facebook but not all of them are truth, some of them are fake just to attract views. Another reason is There are lots of solutions to stop the growth of disinformation on the internet. First, you have to consider whether the information is fake or truth. Do not share false information.
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can access to internet have increased. Follow the development, the amount of disinformation on the internet has risen to become a
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threat to public
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wellbeing
. There are
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for the growth of misinformation on the internet and
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reason is there are
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a lot of
fake news on everywhere on the internet and social media.
For example
, there are lots of
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informations
about
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Corona virus
on Facebook
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not all of them are truth,
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of them are fake
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to attract views. Another reason is

There are lots of solutions to
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the growth of disinformation on the internet.
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consider whether the information is fake or truth. Do not share false information.

IELTS academic The amount of misinformation on the internet has grown to become a serious threat to public wellbeing. What are the causes for the growth of misinformation on the internet? What solutions are being taken to stop the growth of misinformation on the internet.

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