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The graph below shows the average years of schooling in four countries from 1900 to 2000. Summarise...

The graph below shows the average years of schooling in four countries from 1900 to 2000. Summarise. . . kbO3R

The line graph provides information about the average years of schooling in four countries from 1900 to 200. Overall, it is clear that UK had the highest overage of schooling over the given period of time, while on the other hand South Korea had raised, which is approximately equivalent to the UK. However, the other countries had a number of up's and down's over the period. In 1900, though the average schooling in the UK was 2 years, the number had changed dramatically to 12 years by the end of the year 2000, while, South Korea started with essentially zero, on the contrary it reached around highest as the UK eventually by crossing Colombia, which started with an year initially, it could reach roughly half of the way of UK. On the other hand, although Tunisia, had numerous up's and down's over a number of years, finally, it tried to increase as much as possible which around 5 years by the end of 2000

The line graph provides information about the average years of schooling in four countries from 1900 to 200.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that UK had the highest overage of schooling over the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period of time, while on the other hand
 South Korea had raised, which is approximately equivalent to the UK. However
, the other countries had a number of up's and down's over the period.

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changed
dramatically
 to 12 years by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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 2000, while, South Korea This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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 it reached around highest as the UK eventually
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started
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initially
, it could reach roughly half of the way of UK.

On the other hand
, although Tunisia, had numerous The possessive apostrophe seems to be incorrect. Please remove the apostrophe if you want to use the plural form of 'up'.ups
up's
 and down's over a number of years, finally
, it tried to increase as much as possible which around 5 years by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2000