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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. ljWwQ
This line graph illustrates the number of UK travellers using three different modes of travelling which are car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030. Overall, it is seen that the most number of commuters in the Uk was those who used cars, and it has increased throughout the period. Also, it is shown that people who used the train were at the bottom by 1970 and rose gradually outgrowing the rate of those using a bus which has been the second and then decreased by 2030. Looking at the figures of travellers using a car, it is noticed that they were the highest around 5 million, and during the period of 5 decades, there was a significant rise which has reached a maximum of 9 million travelers. Next, by looking at those who used a bus, they started in 1970 at approximately 4 million, and this dropped to 3 million by 2030. Whereas commuters via train began with a figure of 2 million and rose significantly reaching 5 million by the end of the period.
This line graph illustrates the number of UK
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using three
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modes of travelling which are car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030.

Overall
, it is
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seen
that the most number of commuters in the
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Uk
was those who
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used
cars, and it has increased throughout the period.
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, it
is shown
that
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people
who
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used
the train were at the bottom by 1970 and rose
gradually
outgrowing the rate of those using a bus which has been the second and then decreased by 2030.

Looking at the figures of
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travellers
using a car, it
is noticed
that they were the highest around 5
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million
, and during the period of 5 decades, there was a significant rise which has reached a maximum of 9
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million
travelers.

Next
, by looking at those who
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used
a bus, they
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started
in 1970 at approximately 4
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million
, and this dropped to 3
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million
by 2030. Whereas commuters via train began with a figure of 2
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million
and rose
significantly
reaching 5
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million
by the
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end
of the period.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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