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the diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth

the diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth jRbE8

The first diagram depicts the different stages in the life cycle of the silk worm. The second set of diagrams depicts the processes involved in the production of silk cloth from this cocoon. The moth lays eggs on the mulberry leaves and within ten days the eggs hatch into silkworm larva. The larva feeds on mulberry leaves and within 4 to 6 weeks, it starts weaving the silk thread. In three to eight days, this thread encases its body and forms a cocoon. The cocoon evolves into the moth in 16 days and the cycle starts again. In order to produce silk cloth, the cocoons are boiled in hot water and the threads are unwound. The threads could be of 300 to 900 meters in length. Some of these threads are twisted and subjected to dye, while others are woven into silk cloth. Both are now ready for the market.

The first
 diagram depicts the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 stages in the life cycle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 worm. The second set of diagrams depicts the processes involved in the production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 cloth from this cocoon.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 moth lays eggs on the mulberry This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 and within ten days the eggs hatch into silkworm larva. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 larva feeds on mulberry This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 and within 4 to 6 weeks, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 weaving the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcordwirestringyarnhairfiber
thread
. In three to eight days, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcordwirestringyarnhairfiber
thread
 encases its body and forms a cocoon. The cocoon evolves into the moth in 16 days and the cycle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 again.

In order to produce You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 cloth, the cocoons are boiled
 in hot water and the threads are unwound. The threads could be of 300 to 900 meters in length. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of these threads are twisted
 and subjected to dye, while others are woven
 into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 cloth. Both are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 ready for the market. 