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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Lr958
The given pie charts illustrate data about what for reason six different areas around the world use water. Overall, there are some wide disparities in each continent in terms of using water for Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic. The biggest shares can be seen on Central Asia and Africa which they use water for mostly Agriculture, while North America and Europe use water for Industry. To begin, Central Asia uses water for Agriculture which is the biggest percentage with 88% and other 12% of a total usage is split between Industry and Domestic, equaling to 5% and 7% respectively. In comparison with Central Asia, Europe uses their water for mostly build buildings, this usage accounted for 53% water of a total and for Domestic and Agricultural use are 15% and 32% in turn. Turning to this usage in North America, it is almost as same as Europe with using 48% of water for Industry. 13% of water used for Domestic. However, using water for Agricultural in North America is nearly twice smaller than South America, amounting to 39% and 71% respectively. In addition, North America also uses 10% of water for Industry and 19% for Agriculture. With respect to South East Asia and Africa, they are nearly as same as Central Asia with using 81 and 84% water for Agriculture. Additionally, 19% of water is split between Industrial use and Domestic in South East Asia and 16% is split for these reasons in Africa.
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