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The graph shows the percentage of households in owned house accommodatio and rented house accommodation in England and Wales during 1918 and 2011.

The graph shows the percentage of households in owned house accommodatio and rented house accommodation in England and Wales during 1918 and 2011. bYrmW
The bar graph compares percentage (%) of houses in purchased and leased stay in England and Wales from 1918 through 2011. The highest percentage of households in owned properties was in 2001, at 69%. While houselholds in rented accommodation was at peak in 1918, at more than 75%. On the contrast, the lowest percentage of households in owned accommodation and in rented accommodation was in 1918 and 2001, with 25% and 30%, respectively. However, the percentage of both households were equal in 1971. From 1918 to 2001, the percentage of households in rented accommodation declined gradually from above 75% to 30%, on the other hand, it increased in households in owned accommodation from slightly more than 20% to little less than 70%. In 2011, the percentage of rented accommodation started rising by 35%. With 35% in 2011, the percentage of owned accommodation fall down. Overall, the higher the percentage of owned house property, the lower the percentage of rented house property.
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and leased stay in England and Wales from 1918 through 2011.

The highest
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properties was in 2001, at 69%. While
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houselholds
in rented
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accommodation
was at peak in 1918, at more than 75%. On the contrast, the lowest
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households
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owned
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and in rented
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was in 1918 and 2001, with 25% and 30%,
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.

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, the
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of both
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households
were equal in 1971. From 1918 to 2001, the
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in rented
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declined
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less than 70%. In 2011, the
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rising by 35%. With 35% in 2011, the
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accommodation
fall down.

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property, the lower the
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IELTS academic The graph shows the percentage of households in owned house accommodatio and rented house accommodation in England and Wales during 1918 and 2011.

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