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The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 to 2020.

The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 to 2020. AgbOX
The chart illustrates the average amount of cheese eaten by citizens of England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland from 1980 to 2020. Overall, England's figures declined steadily throughout the period and Scotland saw a significant decline by the end, whereas people in Wales and in Northern Ireland both increased their cheese consumption during these decades. Despite being the largest consumer of cheese for each decade, England's figures fell consistently from roughly 112 kg in 1980 to approximately 88 kg in 2020. Meanwhile, Scotland started with about 85kg before jumping to roughly 105 kg in 1990. From that point, the figures dropped significantly until it was down to approximately 55 kg in 2020. Wales went from having the second-lowest figure in 1980, roughly 45 kg, to having the second-highest average consumption of cheese in 2020 with approximately 80 kg after increasing throughout the entire period. Northern Ireland showed increases every decade and went from about 12 kg in the beginning to roughly 60 kg.
The chart illustrates the average amount of
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eaten by citizens of England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland from 1980 to 2020.
Overall
, England's
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declined
steadily
throughout the period and Scotland
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a significant decline by the
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, whereas
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people
in Wales and in Northern Ireland both increased their
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cheese
consumption during these decades.

Despite being the largest consumer of
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cheese
for each decade, England's
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figures
fell
consistently
from
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roughly
112 kg in 1980 to approximately 88 kg in 2020. Meanwhile, Scotland
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started
with about
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85kg
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before
jumping to
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roughly
105 kg in 1990. From that point, the
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figures
dropped
significantly
until it was down to approximately 55 kg in 2020.

Wales went from having the second-lowest
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in 1980,
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roughly
45 kg, to having the

second-highest average consumption of
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cheese
in 2020 with approximately 80 kg after increasing throughout the entire period. Northern Ireland
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increases every decade and went from about 12 kg in the beginning to
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60 kg.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 to 2020.

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