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EVOLUTION OF THE HORSE The following Horse diagram shows how to evolution of the horse (from the Eohippus to modern horse) between 40 million ago and to up to now modern horse. As per the first image, we can see Eohippus. That time mentioned before 40 million years and that shape it would be smaller than others. As well as their feat, leg and tail have matched with that size. Also their paw containing 4 thin phalanges. After that, Mesohippus evaluated 30 million years ago and figure also slightly enlarge than first stage. There’s paw become 3 parts and middle one is the largest and the longest than other fingers. In third step, it appearance very close to modern horse. Mcrychippus (before 15 million years ago) has small mane and foot broaden. In this stage, feet middle one slightly longer and become to enlarge consisting small hoof. In the last stage, this modern horse has grown mane, long ponytail and feet confine with strong hoof. Outstanding characteristic is size is increased among all stages.

EVOLUTION OF THE HORSE

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