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The graph below shows the average class size in six countries and compares it with the world average class size in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and give comparisons where relevant.

The depicts chart illustrate primary and hower secondary school diffrent size in various six nation in 2006. Respectivelly compare with uk, japan, southkorea, denmark, mexico, iceland. First and foremost, lower secondary school pupils avrege class size hover Between 19 and 36, compared to primary school class size15 to 34 in six diffrent countries. Additionally, 27 students attended class in japan during 2006, it was fall down lower than 25 in uk and followed by denmark and mexico primary class size were same, which was 21 in 2006. in 2006, the number of student attend class in southkorea, which was highest in all primary school whereas only 15 students consider in iceland. Moreover, age 13 to 16 years student class size was higher than children. lower secondary students class size fluctuite in all nations. southkorea was very highest class size, it was higher than 35. The avrage number of students was 22 in each claa during 2006. Mexico lower higher school class size also same to japan in 2006. The number of students were 16 in each class before they were rosen by 24 in whole world. To conclude, lower secondary class size was also bigget than primary school in 2006.
The depicts chart illustrate
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in various six
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pupils
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avrege
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hover

Between 19 and 36, compared to
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primary
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size15
to 34 in six
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, 27
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attended
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during 2006, it was fall down lower than 25 in
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were same, which was 21 in 2006.
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15
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, age 13 to 16 years
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was higher than children.
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lower
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in all nations.
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, it was higher than 35.

The
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number of
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was 22 in each
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during 2006. Mexico lower higher
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also
same to
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were 16 in each
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by 24 in whole world.

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