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The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided pair of maps reveal changes that have occurred in Dubai in the last 10 years. Overall, although it is evident that a sweeping reform in population and construction has taken place, few items have remained unchanged. Looking at the diagrams, the only striking parallel between the two pictures is about the clock tower in the middle of the roundabout, which has never been renovated, then there the remarkable resemblance ends. Nevertheless, we can distinguish many substantial discrepancies. For instance, the upper side of the traffic circle was mostly covered with sand, furthermore, a bungalow and just a few apartment blocks existed there. Afterward, those structures were demolished and have been replaced with numerous skyscrapers and large condominiums. Also, the roads have become more congested as a result of housing development. What is more, all rows of trees around the area were uprooted. However, the clock tower has been hemmed in by many new Pine trees. To sum up, Dubai has become a more residential and modern city due to the construction, thus a dramatic number of people have settled there.
The provided pair of maps reveal
changes
that have occurred in Dubai in the last 10 years.
Overall
, although it is evident that a sweeping reform in population and construction has taken place, few items have remained unchanged.

Looking at the diagrams, the
only
striking parallel between the two pictures is about the clock tower in the middle of the roundabout, which has never
been renovated
, then there the remarkable resemblance ends.

Nevertheless
, we can distinguish
many
substantial discrepancies.
For instance
, the upper side of the traffic circle was
mostly
covered with sand,
furthermore
, a bungalow and
just
a few apartment blocks existed there. Afterward, those structures
were demolished
and have
been replaced
with numerous skyscrapers and large condominiums.
Also
, the roads have become more congested
as a result
of housing development.

What is more
, all rows of trees around the area
were uprooted
.
However
, the clock tower has
been hemmed
in by
many
new Pine trees.

To sum up, Dubai has become a more residential and modern city due to the construction,
thus
a dramatic number of
people
have settled there.
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IELTS academic The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades.

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